Dangerous Day Job

Hey guys, I reviewed the rules and there’s nothing against releasing my writing battle entry before the results are out, so here it is! As it says on the page, any feedback is appreciated, so I’d be happy to see some comments under the story or this post on what I could improve and what you enjoyed about it. Keep in mind the story was limited to 1000 words and I had one week to write it!

Here’s my story Canine Science Fiction

Thank you for reading,

Benjamin Hawley